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-I've had a favorite light rayon bomber jacket for 10 years, but it's finally wearing out and has some weird bleach stains. This is basically a knockoff of a BB Dakota design, and I may end up making a few variations. This one is a shiny pink polyester (a beautiful exception to my natural fiber rule) with multicolored lace trim, a metal zipper, and a beige drawstring.
+Bomber: I've had a favorite light rayon bomber jacket for 10 years, but it's finally wearing out and has some weird bleach stains. This is basically a knockoff of a BB Dakota design, and I may end up making a few variations. This one is a shiny pink polyester (a beautiful exception to my natural fiber rule) with multicolored lace trim, a metal zipper, and a beige drawstring.
Instead of chiffon, I'm going to include more batiste and poplin. They're all lightweight, layer-friendly fabrics. Chiffon is usually polyester, though, while the others are usually from natural fibers like bamboo or cotton. Like the other tops, it's designed for layering. I will have ruffles at the shoulders and long straps from the waist, so they can be wrapped around and tied in a bow.
-I have a favorite purple floral chiffon kimono that has a seam that is still coming undone after three repairs, so it needs a break. This design is similar, but there's not really a lot you can do with a simple long, kimono-sleeved sheer kimono. This one is rayon batiste, though, with a dark inky print.
+Kimono: I have a favorite purple floral chiffon kimono that has a seam that is still coming undone after three repairs, so it needs a break. This design is similar, but there's not really a lot you can do with a simple long, kimono-sleeved sheer kimono. This one is rayon batiste, though, with a dark inky print.
泣き虫 (Cry Bug): An oversized poplin button-down with short sleeves and an oversized beetle print. It has black piping along seams, a pocket, and black glass shank buttons. The fit is meant to fit like your dad's shirt where the short sleeves come down too far, the armholes are too deep, and the pocket is too big like they're from a menswear shirt, but the collar and length are appropriately proportioned for me. It's white with an oversized print that visually plays up the unusually large proportions of the shirt. The piping and glass shank buttons remain the corrent proportions, though.
-Then there's three mock turtlenecks since I really like light turtlenecks but don't have any anymore. One is a foil knit with thumbholes, one is a striped knit, and one is a 4x2 rib knit.
+Mock Turtle: Then there's three mock turtlenecks since I really like light turtlenecks but don't have any anymore. One is a foil knit with thumbholes, one is a striped knit, and one is a 4x2 rib knit.
-Straight-legged plaid linen pants with a fly-front closure, belt loops, side pockets, and blind hems.
+Pants: Straight-legged plaid linen pants with a fly-front closure, belt loops, side pockets, and blind hems.
-Two pairs of linen shorts, one with stripes and striped fringe ribbon trim and the other with a dragon fruit print and cuffs and a bow belt.
+Shorts: Two pairs of linen shorts, one with stripes and striped fringe ribbon trim and the other with a dragon fruit print and cuffs and a bow belt.
-The one piece swimsuit is made out of pastel green and pink neoprene with pops of yellow in an abstract swampy design. I grew up around wetlands, but I mostly just like the print. It has long sleeves, a mock turtleneck, and an invisible zipper at the center back. The focus is the obi belt made from the same material. There are three panel-and-tier ruffles covering the shorts to give a little poofy contrast against the closely-fitted belt and top without adding more fabric than necessary. I'll probably bring in a thinner swimwear tricot for the layers.
+Swimsuit: The one piece swimsuit is made out of pastel green and pink neoprene with pops of yellow in an abstract swampy design. I grew up around wetlands, but I mostly just like the print. It has long sleeves, a mock turtleneck, and an invisible zipper at the center back. The focus is the obi belt made from the same material. There are three panel-and-tier ruffles covering the shorts to give a little poofy contrast against the closely-fitted belt and top without adding more fabric than necessary. I'll probably bring in a thinner swimwear tricot for the layers.
-The pajamas are not my design. They are basically knock-offs from Yahoo! Japan shopping, since I don't feel like importing pajamas. (Japanese-style yukata-style long sleeve pajama set for spring and fall from OPEN-CLOTHES and summer pajama set for ladies in their 20s with flared collar and cute short sleeves from kittyshop, names translated from Japanese to English.) They're only included in this collection because I have no pajama sets that fit except for the never-seasonally-appropriate heavy sets I get sometimes for my winter birthday. I'm using jacquard fabric I've had around but never used, and instead of the ruffles on second set, I'm going to use oversized rick rack.
+Pajama sets: The pajamas are not my design. They are basically knock-offs from Yahoo! Japan shopping, since I don't feel like importing pajamas. (Japanese-style yukata-style long sleeve pajama set for spring and fall from OPEN-CLOTHES and summer pajama set for ladies in their 20s with flared collar and cute short sleeves from kittyshop, names translated from Japanese to English.) They're only included in this collection because I have no pajama sets that fit except for the never-seasonally-appropriate heavy sets I get sometimes for my winter birthday. I'm using jacquard fabric I've had around but never used, and instead of the ruffles on second set, I'm going to use oversized rick rack.