proofread articles up to Dec 10; made project page consistent; improved presskit page and added PDF download version

src/diary/entries/200831

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 <h2>tuesday, august 4</h2>
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-<li>CentOS VPS obtained through OVH. Yay! We've always wanted a server.</li>
+<li>CentOS VPS obtained through OVH. Always wanted a server.</li>
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 <h2>wednesday, august 5</h2>
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 <li>decide to use PHP for manage blessfrey's blog</li>
 <li>set up a local Apache server for practice. It was a little confusing!</li>
-<li>wrote a vaguely functioning Hello, World! script in PHP</li>
+<li>wrote a vaguely functioning Hello, World script in PHP</li>
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 <h2>saturday, august 8</h2>
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-<li>forgot to bid on the Skull of Death in the <a href="http://www.verpets.com/auctions/">Auction House</a>...aw man...</li>
 <li>added images to live site despite conflicts with Linux's security</li>
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 <h2>sunday, august 9</h2>
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-<li>second week of <a href="https://flightrising.com/main.php?p=dominance">dom</a>! yeah!</li>
 <li>studied PHP with <a href="https://www.w3schools.com/php/php_intro.asp">W3Schools</a></li>
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 <h2>monday, august 17</h2>
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-<li>Research PHP + MySQL while attending. I think MySQL is overkill for my purposes, since all my articles couldn't possibly be that much data. It might be interesting for analyzing data, though, like adding a word cloud of the most common tags or a search feature.</li>
+<li>Research PHP + MySQL while attending. I think MySQL is overkill for my purposes, since all my articles couldn't possibly be that much data. It might be interesting for analyzing data, though, like adding a word cloud of the most common tags or a search feature. I'll keep things simple for now. </li>
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 <h2>august 18 - august 21</h2>
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-<li>Attend for the Fire Flight while trying out a new mmo - ArcheAge, since my friends play it.</li>
-<li>I told a friend I would play Go with him soon but was too busy with the raffle. Then someone told him I was online a lot in ArcheAge...oops...that looked bad lol. It wasn't like I played more than a few minutes at a time.</li>
+<li>Help run a FlightRising community event while trying out ArcheAge, since my friends play it.</li>
+<li>I told a friend I would play Go with him soon but was too busy with the raffle. Then someone told him I was online a lot in ArcheAge...oops...that looked bad lol. It wasn't like I played more than a few minutes at a time. I'm sorry, friend;;</li>
 <li>finally get access to the code for an mmo some friends work on. I start familiarizing myself with the code and start planning my new feature.</li>
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 <h2>sunday, august 23</h2>
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-<li>I work on my friends' mmo more. I make my own branch and make my first changes. The work environment is Windows-only, and the server is live with active players. </li>
+<li>I work on my friends' mmo more. I make my own branch and make my first changes. The work environment is Windows-only, and the server is live with active players. Pretty cool experience. </li>
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 <h2>monday, august 24</h2>
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 <h2>tuesday, august 25</h2>
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-<li>Play around with CSS + HTML for the website. The CSS Grid didn't exist the last time I used CSS (for petsite profiles lol), so I'm more comfortable with floats. The Grid looks so worth learning, though, for more consistent and responsive web design. </li>
+<li>Play around with CSS + HTML for the website. The CSS Grid didn't exist the last time I used CSS (for 2000s petsite profiles), so I'm more comfortable with floats. The Grid looks so worth learning, though, for more consistent and responsive web design. </li>
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 <h2>wednesday, august 26</h2>