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 <h1>blessfrey in japanese </h1>
 october 29, 2020<br>
-#internationalization #localization<br>
+#godot #internationalization #localization<br>
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 Instead of hard-coding text, keep it in a spreadsheet instead. It's easier to organize, edit, and it also makes possible future translations a much smoother process. <br>
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 <h2>step 5 - continue adding to your spreadsheet </h2>
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-Now that everything's in place, you can keep adding new ids + translations, and Godot will automatically use your changes in-game. <br>
+Now that everything's in place, you can keep adding new ids and translations, and Godot will automatically use your changes in-game. <br>
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 <h2>step 6 - insert values into text </h2>
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 <h2>that's the basics </h2>
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-<img src="/static/img/ent/internationalization_japanese.png" alt="(image: blessfrey screenshot in Japanese)" width="500" height="370.46"><br>
+<img src="/static/img/ent/internationalization_japanese.png" alt="(image: Blessfrey screenshot in Japanese)" width="500" height="370.46"><br>
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-It all comes together for an old screenshot of blessfrey's main menu in my broken Japanese. やべーな！<br>
+It all comes together for an old screenshot of Blessfrey's main menu in my broken Japanese. やべーな！ <br>
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+Last updated June 8, 2021 <br>
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